Tons of great blog posts for Six Sentence Sunday. Here is mine. (If you tweet, use the hashtag #sixsunday.)
Everything about Diana caused his body to feel like a mouse on speed. His words wanted to rush out. His heart thought that the faster it pumped blood the better he’d be at talking to the woman. His eyes never wanted to focus on one spot. They liked the lean body that she clothed in skin-tight tank tops and pants, and they attempted to stare at every part. His brain had made great use of those images, but he needed to give attention to her eyes, large, brown, and brimming with emotion.
Nice Six. Very descriptive.
Great six!
Great Six!
I’m loving the descriptions in this six! Fab stuff xx
Mouse on speed – π good snippet
Great descriptions to the story!
Great male POV. I believe him. Fantastic six! Thank you.
Beautifully done. I can picture her through his eyes.
cheers
Lz
Mouse on speed…I can picture him!
You had me at “a mouse on speed.” This poor guy doesn’t have a chance. I love the mix of humor and desperation on his part.
“a mouse on speed” gave me a giggle
Wow, love the feeling of him devouring her with his eyes – nicely written.
Sometimes it can be so damn hard for a man to actually look into a woman’s eyes when the rest of her is so damn distracting. You’ve done a great job of describing how jumbled a man’s thoughts can be when his “little head” is done the thinking. Cool – I Like it.
Great six! Lovely description
mouse on speed… that’s funny
In the presence of male hotness, I have soooo been where this guy is! (Also known to bump into walls and trip over waste paper baskets.) Can reallly relate. Good job!
Poor guy. Talk about frustrated.
He’s not frustrated for too long.
Guess we know what he wants. It will be interesting to see.
Someone’s got it bad! LOL
Love his obsession with her. Could lead to some interesting conversation! π
Am wondering why her eyes are ‘brimming with emotion’. Great snippet.
I like his attention to her body but I love that he recognized his need to pay attention to her eyes. They are the gateway to the soul, or so I’ve heard. Terrific six.
Charming description of his arousal and confusion! A promising relationship and a great six!
It’s all about the eyes, huh? π
Sounds like he’s overwhelmed — sensory overload! Great description.
Loved the description Ursula!
Descriptive six! I’m glad he’s at least attempting to focus on her eyes. π
Great six!